darkness rule i serve only the lich king, if you wan to see my go to hell(inspire by dota)
posted by happy mouse at 1:00 AM
Hi Xavier, This is a pretty good piece.. Except it doesn't sound "Xavier". How about adding your own comments to your piece in the last paragraph? Also, check the capitalisation of the first alphabet in your sentences.
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Hi Xavier,
This is a pretty good piece.. Except it doesn't sound "Xavier". How about adding your own comments to your piece in the last paragraph? Also, check the capitalisation of the first alphabet in your sentences.
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